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Allen Kwon's avatar

I felt that shift when the glamour slipped. The scent description alone—ozone, frost, stone—was enough to raise goosebumps. Great use of tension.

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Finn-the-Huck's avatar

I've always loved reading Wild Cards by George rr Martin. This story of yours has the same vibes and I am loving it!

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